"Don't Give Up"- Brand new song!!!

That's right peeps, I'm over here pimping my new shit! I just finished a rough take on the backing vocals of my brand-new song, and wanted you to hear it. I hope you like it!!!


Here's the link...

www.myspace.com/jimrykbost

Sounds pretty cool. Only critique (and it's minor) is I'd like to hear more guitar but an enjoyable listen.

Ed wrote:Sounds pretty cool. Only critique (and it's minor) is I'd like to hear more guitar but an enjoyable listen.

Thanks Ed! I appreciate it, and definitely agree. This was the first mix of the song, and keep in mind... this is just a demo version. The drums are programmed, and the bass was played by me on the keys. If we record this for the album, it'll sound MUCH better. I'm still trying to figure out what to do with this song.

Do I pay to record real drums on it, and include it with the songs already recorded for the album? Do I give it to Andrew for the next MRCD? I don't even know if he likes it yet. Any thoughts?

Jim

Well done my son...that has all the makings of a mighty fine track - it's crying out for a chorus of backing vocals and I'd like to hear a heavy build up of Keys rather than more dominant guitar. I'm really impressed dude

Styxman wrote:Jim

Well done my son...that has all the makings of a mighty fine track - it's crying out for a chorus of backing vocals and I'd like to hear a heavy build up of Keys rather than more dominant guitar. I'm really impressed dude

Thanks man,! I'm glad you liked it. The song needs just a little more oomph in the backing vocals but I think the guitars need to come up just a tad in the chorus. I am thinking of adding something else backing-vocal wise in the chorus too, but we'll see how it pans out. Thanks for checking it out!

I wouldn't hold back waiting for replies on here Jim - it's like Mubarak's wallet - empty

Styxman wrote:I wouldn't hold back waiting for replies on here Jim - it's like Mubarak's wallet - empty

Lol!! I know we're few here, but I just thought some people here might like to hear it or discuss it, that don't go to MR anymore. Maybe I was wrong?

Just jokin' - it's quality over here rather than quantity or so B keeps reminding me

Sounds great ! As you know needs some more guitars and a heavier real bass sound. Keep up the great work man ! Its gonna be a great song once youre done with it.

That was pretty sweet. I'm with the rest with the whole guitars and bass comments. But other than that...AWESOME demo, dude.